Fantastic little short
This little clip was enough to get a laugh out of me. The faery conveyed a good range of emotion to convey the story and build up to the inevitable and humorous result.
The dress effect was really nice.
wow thank u so much!!! i loved to read you ;u;
The opening should have been cut
The effort put in for a first flash definitely makes this flash deserve a place in the portal. However, the opening where the fish is drawn almost made me close the movie and blam it. In general, shape tweens should never be used when the tween scrambles things up in the process of changing. Some of the later blood tweens looked ok.
If the movie just opened up with the fish story it would have gone a long way to drawing in the viewer.
The choice of music was good and served as a nice backdrop.
Very nice treatment of the song
I think you did a great job of capturing the feel of the song with the story you were telling. The detailed backgrounds seemed almost too well done for the cartoon style characters but the attention to the detail wasa really nice addition to the movie.
I'd go for the sounds
The tiny download size is really nice but finding a few sound effects and/or background music would add to the game greatly. A noise to start, when new turrets pop up and when the bunny bites it would be nice. Plus a small looping background song with a frantic feel would add another dimesion to the game.
Nice work though for such a small size.
Not a bad game at all
This was a nice little game and a decent challenge... somethings could stand to be improved to save the movie (I fifened and it only made the score 1.64).
1. The opening screen/instructions... put more care into the art/presentation here. First impressions are important.
2. Have more background than just the white surrounding the different levels... keep things visually changing.
Keep up the good work.
I think this is the true answer to the strip quizes on here. The questions weren't too bad (says a guy who almost always wins triva games) definately made me think rather than just walk through the game. Oh and the Naked Naru??? Man, that was pure class. Mighty fine work, sir.
Thank you very much good sir. I found the Naked Naru quite delicious. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
nice underlying music to use
The piece contains several different sounds that appear for only a short while, only to be replaced by another quickly after. This gives the feeling of different stages or movements that could easily inspire a different corresponding scene to match the sound while the underlying beat/theme ties everything together. Nice work.
woah ... thanks. and especially thanks for the indepth review.
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