TimScheff's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meow Meow]

kitty

kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty kitty

If only the cat actually danced for us.

Druganought responds:

TIM IS THE BOMB PPL CHECK THIS GUY OUT

[TV sketch]

Nice gag

A nice quick funny clever gag. Unfortunately it looks like small file 0-voters are going to kill this. Sad. very sad.

kusk responds:

Thanks.. yep sad it will get blammed.. But I don't wan't to take any CREDIT for this.. It's just something from a MONTY PYTHON EPISODE I DID A REMAKE OF IN FLASH.. only thing I take credit for is the art-work and sounds which I made.

[The Beast]

Nice

You have good art and animation skills, but the story needs to be drawn out more. Just as soon as a viewer gets into the story, sees what the beast does/is capable of the movie ends. Either a confrontation with the beast or some small twist (the beat evilly following someone into a new house) would have ended things very nicely.

Druganought responds:

Thanks man im gonna make beast two and im gonna put your name on a gravestone TimScheff

[Freds Eye 3]

Improving

Looking through the different Fred's Eye movies, there is clearly some improvement between them. The highlighted/shaded faces are in a nice style. The voice work could be better, the voices aren't mature sounding enough for the artwork. The bigest drawback, and it applies to the whole series, is that the episodes are too short to really develop a connection to the story. Parts of the earlier movies could probably be integrated into a beginning/ backstory and attached to a longer episode, getting people up to speed quickly and more engrossed in the story.
Fred's eye is by no means great, but it definately is a much more respectable submission than most of what gets submitted to the portal.

Druganought responds:

The fourth one is a lot better an i know the whole series is shit but the fourth ones ok

[Hackers]

where's the rest?

That was the start of a movie, where's the rest? It doesn't make much sense to submit only half a movie. In addition, the voices didn't really feel like they fit.

Druganought responds:

In addition your Police Lieutenant so I have no abuse for you sorry

[VG Warz ep.2]

The silence

The silence was deafening. The style was all right but its hard to watch something when I wasn't geting any sounds.

AgentKirbyPuff responds:

But silence is golden,nah just kidding.Well I will try to find some sounds.

[lolods]

Nice Tool

Overall it's a nice tool for a new user but not anything overly interesting to someone with even a few days on NG. The text at the bottom could have been made larger because it was hard to read with a lower default quality setting.

Homophobe responds:

why didn't you put it on high?
even if it had been slow to load likemy comp I put it on high quality once it's done