It started ok
But then died. Carry the idea through a bit more, the angels disappearing and then the stab was a let down. much more humor in her killing her self while the good angel rants only to look down and see its too late, or her actually getting what she needs to be popular, wiht some sort of hilarious result.
Also, fix the sound... record your sound clips over until there is no :pffh: and cracking sounds... That really hurt the movie.
The style was great, even with the non-descript charachters the little manifiestations by the shoulder angels were great.