It was ok
The movie was ok, definately worth a place on the portal. Some of your good idea/bad ideas were pretty predictable (the construction site in particular). I liked the loaded gun clip because I was expecting a suicide, though it would have been nice to see the results of the misfire.
The one thing I wonder is if you compressed the audio file(s) because the file szie seems pretty huge for the amount of content. The score probably would have been better if you optimized the audio because the wait for the movie would have been less onerous for people with slower connections.
Good work in general, I hope you get a chance to learn from this one and make even better stuff.